Paragraph Analysis 2

This blog post will reflect on my paragraph analysis for Project 2 by describing my paragraphs' strengths and weaknesses. My paragraph analysis can be found here.

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This paragraph analysis helped me realize that some of my body paragraphs could use a lot more analysis. I have sufficient evidence, but I seem to sometimes include little analysis to support the evidence. The analysis that I do have relates my evidence back to the main points of each paragraph, but sometimes doesn't relate it to the entire rhetorical situation of the article as a whole. This is something that I will definitely need to revise before submitting my final project. In addition, some of my arguments are repetitive, so I will need to go back through the essay to delete unnecessary sentences.

On the other hand, I did feel like my essay was organized in a way that made sense to the reader. The thesis clearly shows exactly what I will be talking about, which allows my essay to flow naturally from there. I think the organization will definitely help me organize my ideas as I go back to my essay and add some more detailed analysis.