Revised Conclusion

In this blog post, I will write about my revised conclusion, and why I think it may be more successful than my old conclusion for this paper. The old and revised conclusions can be found here.

M1-L3C, "Conclusion." 11/27/13 via Wikimedia Commons. Attribution-Share Alike License. 

My old conclusion fell into the trap of summarizing my claims, rather than choosing one of the four approaches that are explained in the Student's Guide reading. This conclusion attempts to look forward at the future of this debate, and relates the rhetoric used to the future of the argument. I think it is more successful in that it also gets the reader interested in learning more about the topic, since it looks forward to what the future of this technology in the biomedical field is going to look like. This seems to be much more effective than merely summarizing the main claim of my paper.